Ki ora Bloggers
Today I am doing a summer learning journey activity. I have to catch up because I'm only in the first activity. The activity is Your Comments Count. What I had to do was find a blog and comment on their post. Here is a link to the post I commented on: BlogThe comment had to be helpful thoughtful and positive. Here is a screenshot of the comment I wrote:
Do you think my comment is good?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Hi Tiffany
ReplyDeleteI really like your post and don't worry if you are not at the same pass becuase you don't have to do ever activity that there is. I like the comment but next time you could add a bit more ifomation to it and on your post you could tell use why you might think your comment if positive helpful or tought full. Also you could add what you had to do to complet the activity we had to do. Over all you did a great post Tiffany. Did you like the activity?#
From Angel-Mey at Yaldhurst Modle School
Kia Ora Tiffany,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
I think you’ve written a lovely comment. I like that it’s positive with you explaining to the blogger what you liked about the post. I also like how you were thoughtful, engaging them with a question to hopefully strike up a conversation!
An important thing to remember when leaving a comment is what sort of comment you would like to receive. What sort of questions would you like? Perhaps you could add something helpful to your comments as well.
Could you add a link to the post you commented on so your readers better understand your comment.
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)