What I know about commenting on blogs:
To comment on blogs the comments has to be positive and helpful. You can put feedback to help them get better and ask a question at the end. Don't put negative or private information. At the start you can say Hi or any other greetings then the bloggers name and at the end you put your name.
My first comment today is on Francis' Blog:
Hi Francis,
I like how you explained what a school journal is. What Is zapped from your activity? Maybe next time you can be more specific and put more detail so I can understand.
Tiffany
The second comment today is on Storm's Blog:
Hi Storm:
I really like your book and the animals you picked had full of facts in it! maybe you can try draw the animals or add more facts. Why did you pick these animals?
Tiffany
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